I liked it. I like your discriptive stuff. The /wrongness/ of the Dark Queen's temple was very vivid. I liked the creepy dwarf too. Was he canon or a random Skull Bearer creation? And as ever I was inwardy screaming 'noooooooooo' in the Raistlin bits. He can't give up! Grrr...Fistandantilus is such a evil old lich. You make him so much more evil than he is in canon. Its a different kind of evil, less power mad and more coldly malicious.
But yeah, was good. Still desperately waiting to see what happens in the dramatic confrontation between Dalamar and Fistandantilus. I hope Raistlin is going to get his revenge too.
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I liked it. I like your discriptive stuff. The /wrongness/ of the Dark Queen's temple was very vivid. I liked the creepy dwarf too. Was he canon or a random Skull Bearer creation? And as ever I was inwardy screaming 'noooooooooo' in the Raistlin bits. He can't give up! Grrr...Fistandantilus is such a evil old lich. You make him so much more evil than he is in canon. Its a different kind of evil, less power mad and more coldly malicious.
But yeah, was good. Still desperately waiting to see what happens in the dramatic confrontation between Dalamar and Fistandantilus. I hope Raistlin is going to get his revenge too.