http://lu-tbc.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lu-tbc.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] skull_bearer 2011-10-18 10:11 pm (UTC)

There are many wonderful things I could say about this chapter, the least of which would be the amazing way you recreated the missiles part... and Charles' power, good, God!

But I feel the thing that deserves the biggest applause is your take on Angel... her pride and where it derives from... the true belief she had on her actions... her final rejection for Charles' hand... and Charles' own conflict at everything related to her...
Simply beautiful.

Many congratulations for you, fantastic author!!!!

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