#3 Physical description: silversilky waist long hair and golden eyes for one, with that colouring, why the name "Ravyn" For two. Before we even get to the powers, the hair and eyes *scream* self-insertion.
#4 (the good part) Powers:His powers are...his voice ...
from soothing someone, encouraging someone to heal, hypnothise, hurt someone etc., he also could teleport like Kurt, has enhanced senses and healing factor
Why don't we just make "Ravyn" a super-Sue with the ability to fly, read minds, and swim through mud only to come out looking absolutely perfect?
#5 Secrecy: No one knows about this lover. He just magically springs forth from gods-know-where, to be the perfect companion of all time. (Twenty bucks says that this AnimeRebel014 person wanted "Rayvn" to have a 12 inch penis and the ability to deep-throat as well).
I can't believe this person would ever think to put something like that to writing and then let ask you to write it.
*dies laughing* Is there room for one more in the maggot pit?
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regna
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Date: 2007-09-25 06:37 pm (UTC)Clue #1 OC lover
#2 the Name: Whisper? Oh, please!
#3 Physical description: for one, with that colouring, why the name "Ravyn" For two. Before we even get to the powers, the hair and eyes *scream* self-insertion.
#4 (the good part) Powers:...... Why don't we just make "Ravyn" a super-Sue with the ability to fly, read minds, and swim through mud only to come out looking absolutely perfect?
#5 Secrecy: No one knows about this lover. He just magically springs forth from gods-know-where, to be the perfect companion of all time. (Twenty bucks says that this AnimeRebel014 person wanted "Rayvn" to have a 12 inch penis and the ability to deep-throat as well).
I can't believe this person would ever think to put something like that to writing and then let ask you to write it.
*dies laughing* Is there room for one more in the maggot pit?