Well, hello! I would like to thank You for the story - that one and the first part. Especially for using Polish language here and there - It`s really nice to be able to see familiar words. There was one which was wrong used (actually, you used 'płeć' what means 'gender' when you was talking about having sex ;) the word 'stosunek' would be better in this situation)
---By the way, sorry for my grammar. My English is much more than just rusty and I`m desperately trying to not forget it all. ---
The second thing I enjoyed in your story was that everybody`s not happy just after they were rescued. The reality is still dark, still unhappy, old nightmares haunted our poor mutants, bad thing still around them and nobody is magically tolerant for their relationship.
I`m waiting for the next part it is really worth time. (and yes, I read entire story in one day, call me insane >.>)
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Date: 2011-07-10 06:20 pm (UTC)I would like to thank You for the story - that one and the first part.
Especially for using Polish language here and there - It`s really nice to be able to see familiar words. There was one which was wrong used (actually, you used 'płeć' what means 'gender' when you was talking about having sex ;) the word 'stosunek' would be better in this situation)
---By the way, sorry for my grammar. My English is much more than just rusty and I`m desperately trying to not forget it all. ---
The second thing I enjoyed in your story was that everybody`s not happy just after they were rescued. The reality is still dark, still unhappy, old nightmares haunted our poor mutants, bad thing still around them and nobody is magically tolerant for their relationship.
I`m waiting for the next part it is really worth time.
(and yes, I read entire story in one day, call me insane >.>)